To Northamptonshire Let us Go. Will you come my Lady?

Very descriptive. U can make the reader live the moment and yet participate especially if he was a groom. U need to look after the rhyme . 4 ex: like HOME/ STORM. most of th rhyme was a repetition of GO & ROW.. weakens the strength of Ur poem. However, It was a colorful dynamic picture w/ lots of going & rowng. I like it . :)